A Paragraph of Emotion

WALT..Use 'show not tell'. This week my class have been practicing to use show not tell in our sentences/paragraphs. Our class had to do a paragraph of describing a specific feeling. I enjoyed doing this because I like this type of writing. What I found hard was using more show not tell with the feeling I had. What did you infer from reading my writing?

I was still on the other side of the hall, waiting for the referee to call me. My whole body felt numb; I jumped, shook and jogged on my spot. As I was inhaling the most air I could have, my heart was making its way out of my throat. It was time to enter the new and slippery mats, my opponent looked straight to shaking pupils. I placed the last gear on my head and sealed it strongly. My gloved fists covered both sides of my squeezed cheeks as I yelled and started to strike.

Special Ones

WALT..Think about all the individuals/groups that have influenced your knowledge and understanding of Jesus. For this week I chose to post a DLO about the people that guided me through my journey about learning Jesus. What I found hard was remembering who taught and helped me about Jesus. What I enjoyed was creating my template. Next time I will try to add more people and explanation.