Freaky Goldy

Last Friday, we wrote a story about Goldilocks but she's different from the story kids usually read. Our task was to make a story of our own about Goldilocks. Here's my rhyming story...

Miss Goldy-Locks

Never ever in this world had the most stinky lady. But that’s because she’s freaking lazy. For her, having a good bath makes her grumpy, that’s why her mother thinks she’s smelly.

Eating is one of her best priority, therefore her friends call her ‘Fatty’. Calling her ‘Fatty’ makes her lonely so her friends are very sorry. She shockingly said “My name is ‘Goldy’ not ‘Fatty’, so don’t you dare tease me!”

Goldy became really scary, yeah, really scary she could suck your tasty blood...mmm (She wanted to be a Vampire). She made her friends carry her precious dairy. Now her friends- no, not really her friends, her SLAVES. So her slaves think she is grumpy.

After several days, Goldy decided to become friendly-for real. She said, “I’m sorry my Katie”. Yeah Katie’s her number one slave. So Katie forgave Goldy happily. “Finally you became friendly!” said Katie enthusiastically with shivers ( shhh, she’s still scary).

End of Story